you should atleast if anything render it as a video and not a loop.
lags waay too much.
Maaan those frame by frames moments were smooth yo. But this still looks like a really raw animatic
HEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYyeah the good part is that your animation skills are really good along with the colours, but you could work on your jokes a little more.
I really appreaciate all that feedback man! Thank you :D I'll work on better jokes XD
The music should be volumed down a bit, honestly.
Great job on the animation, though!
Thanks for watching! and thank you for the feed back.
Well, I'm gonna be fully honest here alright yeah.
Personally, I think you had a little too much inspiration, now I don't mean that as a bad thing, but this looks really really much the same as jazza's intro or outro's.
I see you have potentials, I like that.
NOW FOR THE GOOD PART HIHIYEEEEYAYc:
The animation looks really good for someone who's "recently re-discovered his passion for animation and stuff" but I think you should do some tiny few in-betweens on the frames, because some movements there look a little too rough in my opinion hehehehehehehehehehehe. ALSO you could try put some shadows here and there, yeah.
Thanks for the detailed review and critique. My future animations will definitely be much more of my own style. The main reason why I chose to create something so similar, was to give myself a bit of a point of reference to make sure I was on the right track. My future movies, while remaining a similar style, will be unique and original to my own creative ideas. Thanks again for the review and the honesty. Stay creative!
Did you use after effects or flash for this?
I would strongly suggest finishing the still remaining animatics rather than just getting lazy and not doing it
i thought it was funier this way.. lol
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